In a message dated 6/2/2001 10:29:06 AM Eastern Daylight Time,
dorisopran@a... writes:
dorisopran@a... writes:
<< during the
> day preceeding an evening recital >>
why not just change it to 'during the day, preceeding an evening recital',
the comma making the meaning clear? (god, i lead such a full life!)
mike
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